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Climbing, Climbing
Ever climbing!
Will it never stop?

I've been climbing all these
long long years...
And still not reached the top.

Closer. I can see it there
So close... and yet so far
Mortal (Striding up those endless stairs
Forgetting who you are)

Yet still climbing
It is out of reach
Whispering promises to me

So I'll keep climbing,
Ever climbing.
Oh, what toil life can be.
©2005-2009 ~JacquelynAnn
:iconjacquelynann:

Author's Comments

I couldn't sleep the other night ... *suprise suprise* and i was just staring up at my glow in teh dark stickers and this popped into my head. After about half an hour of wondering if i really could be bothered writing it down i decided i'd better.

So here it is. :)

NOTE: Picture taken by Sachin sarnobat. [link] * go to his page. some ok stuff*

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:iconraentrieve:
:D Sweet. A concept we're all familiar with.. ^_^ Nicely done. Bravo!

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The hallowed lands so far behind
As fleeting dreams still linger
Like distant voices through the rain
Like grains of sand cast from my hands
:iconjacquelynann:
thankyou so much. and thanks for the fav.

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"Restlessness is always driving me, and i cannot help it" - Charles Dickens.
:iconraentrieve:
Yer welcome.. ^_^

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The hallowed lands so far behind
As fleeting dreams still linger
Like distant voices through the rain
Like grains of sand cast from my hands
:iconmakeshiftsoul:
:heart: :heart: :heart:!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this! the way it's written and everything! It reminds me of stuff from way back in the day, where people used Olde English and what not.

:+fav:!

beautiful piccy as well

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Dream forever
:iconjacquelynann:
thanks hun :heart:

Yeah i luvs teh pikkeh. Spent good time looking for nice one and found this :D :D

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"Restlessness is always driving me, and i cannot help it" - Charles Dickens.
:iconmakeshiftsoul:
lol :hug:

anytime!

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Dream forever
:iconprincessmiras:
this is very good and the picture is so cool but unfortunately i couldn't get to the link

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~*~M~*~

All you need to do is to follow your heart and BELIEVE!!!


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:iconamzarahgunn:
i love it. the meaning, the flow, the structure, and the picture suits it so well. :heart:

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MOVED: =MachinesBleedToo
:iconkat1e-:
i like this :hug: nice pic too:)

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Katie Hughes Photography

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