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TATTOO by ~JacquelynAnn:iconJacquelynAnn:

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TATTOO



Tiny tears, the skin is filled
The pain now pleasure -
I sigh at the pressure.
The blood now tears

You've left your mark.

Kiss.
The sweet kiss of pain
Spirals. Wire. Barbs. Upon my spine
Sending chills... i don't mind the blood,
It spill like a river
ALong the valley of my spine

You've left your mark

Dye,
These pigments. This flesh
Caress it with this agony
Paint the black heart. The centre of all
Roses and thorns
No pain at all...

You've left your mark.

Imprints. OF emotions
Sensitive to the touch.  -          I relish the pain -
Like a lover it engulfs me. Promises
Soothes with its honest cruelty, so like love
Black as my soul. After you

You've left your mark

And i know you still won't feel it.
As i do. This pain.

You've left your mark
Upon my skin
They want me to move on
But I'm marked now
I'll not letthem in.

You're an accomplished torturer
The pain now pleasure
Torture our souls

You're an accomplished torturer.

My skin bears it now, my heart too.
A gift . A mirror of pain.

This Tattoo.
©2005-2009 ~JacquelynAnn
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Submitted: January 14, 2005
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Just a song i wrote whilst listening to Alien Ant Farm. Its ok i spose.
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~PrincessMiras:iconPrincessMiras: Jan 16, 2005, 2:37:11 AM
have i read tjis before coz it seems awfully familiar to me.

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~*~M~*~

All you need to do is to follow your heart and BELIEVE!!!


I is a member of :iconharry-potter-club: coz i is a very big fan of HP!
~tourniquetshadow:icontourniquetshadow: Jan 16, 2005, 9:01:30 AM
'And she's cheating on you!!!!!!!!!!'
I discourage the multiple exclamation marks.

A good piece, especially since if you hadn`t named it TATTOO or had that last line, I would`ve thought it was about emotional pain. :D

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:meditate: Mister Einstein says, put your hand on a hot stove for a minute, and it seems like an hour. Sit with a pretty girl for an hour, and it seems like a minute. THAT`s relativity. :ninjaeat:
~JacquelynAnn:iconJacquelynAnn: Jan 17, 2005, 1:45:53 AM
yep it was originally submitted in scraps but ir ead it to a mate and tehy said it should be a dev ... you tihnk maybe not?

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"Restlessness is always driving me, and i cannot help it" - Charles Dickens.
~JacquelynAnn:iconJacquelynAnn: Jan 17, 2005, 1:47:53 AM
lol it is a metaphor - i know its a bit obvious, yeah i must edit out those exclamation marks.. um al ittle bit carried away there. Thank god all the stuff that inspired this piece is over and done with :D :D

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"Restlessness is always driving me, and i cannot help it" - Charles Dickens.
~PrincessMiras:iconPrincessMiras: Jan 18, 2005, 4:12:39 AM
no i just remembered that i had read it before

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~*~M~*~

All you need to do is to follow your heart and BELIEVE!!!


I is a member of :iconharry-potter-club: coz i is a very big fan of HP!
~darkfaerie33:icondarkfaerie33: Jan 20, 2005, 4:36:38 PM
wow, i'm in awe. this is so beautiful. tis amazing.

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No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.
~Eleanor Roosevelt

Life is just a series of illusions... until you lose the illusion that you're alive:blackrose:
~JacquelynAnn:iconJacquelynAnn: Jan 21, 2005, 10:04:36 PM
:blush: thankyou.

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"Restlessness is always driving me, and i cannot help it" - Charles Dickens.
~eternalpoet:iconeternalpoet: Mar 15, 2005, 1:04:33 AM
"Like a lover it engulfs me. Promises"... WOW :worship: I am not worthy.

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History is the record of an encounter between character and circumstances...
~donald Creighton.
~JacquelynAnn:iconJacquelynAnn: Mar 15, 2005, 4:50:26 PM
your doing it again :blush: stop it :P

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"Restlessness is always driving me, and i cannot help it" - Charles Dickens.
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